Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Lonely by ~AmphitritetheNereid:iconAmphitritetheNereid:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I walk a beaten, lonely road
With no lights or map to guide me through
Everything's a twisted maze
All is cracked and gloomy blue

No one stirs in empty windows
Animals just stay away
Lost angels stray through alleyways
Houses lay like old men- ivy crumbles brick

I'm all alone, me and my tears
With no crying shoulder or willing ears
The sky is gray, the path looks dark
I'm all alone
©2008-2009 ~AmphitritetheNereid
:iconamphitritethenereid:

Author's Comments

...

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconwater-is-my-soul:
~Water-is-my-Soul Mar 16, 2008, 3:56:38 PM
1) Well done. The story, sad though it may be, is well thought out and illustrated. I can see every emotion and every place where your sadness resides.

2) I am here if you need me. I have been known to give my share of advice, and am a fairly good listener. Anything, anything at all.

--
My mind is water, my heart is water, and my soul is water. I am a creature of the sea, and that you cannot change.
:iconanimeiz1:
~animeiz1 Mar 16, 2008, 4:00:12 PM
Are you okay?

You're going to shoopdawhopp me for this but... Dylan troubles?

--
Teh Epic Failurez

~Psychotic-Child is our leader
~Neon-POP is mah mastah
~AmphitritetheNereid is mah sis
~AmIEmo is mah bestest school friend
[link] <--click!!!
[link]
:iconamphitritethenereid:
~AmphitritetheNereid Mar 16, 2008, 4:38:25 PM
a little....

:boing:

--
*Amuria made my icon.
:iconamphitritethenereid:
~AmphitritetheNereid Mar 16, 2008, 4:38:42 PM
:boing::boing::boing:boing boing boing.

--
*Amuria made my icon.
:iconamphitritethenereid:
~AmphitritetheNereid Mar 16, 2008, 4:42:38 PM
Thank you! *Uses your shoulder and grabs a Kleenex* You're such a kind soul...*sniffles*

--
*Amuria made my icon.
:iconanimeiz1:
~animeiz1 Mar 16, 2008, 7:58:40 PM
u wanna talk?

--
Teh Epic Failurez

~Psychotic-Child is our leader
~Neon-POP is mah mastah
~AmphitritetheNereid is mah sis
~AmIEmo is mah bestest school friend
[link] <--click!!!
[link]
:iconwater-is-my-soul:
~Water-is-my-Soul Mar 16, 2008, 7:59:21 PM
Anything for a fellow Nereid.

--
My mind is water, my heart is water, and my soul is water. I am a creature of the sea, and that you cannot change.
:iconanimeiz1:
~animeiz1 Mar 16, 2008, 8:11:01 PM
:boing:

--
Teh Epic Failurez

~Psychotic-Child is our leader
~Neon-POP is mah mastah
~AmphitritetheNereid is mah sis
~AmIEmo is mah bestest school friend
[link] <--click!!!
[link]
Previous Page1234Next Page

Details

March 16, 2008
561 bytes

Statistics

30
0
56 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map

©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy